Jaikune

Hey guys!  I just want to let you all know that I've been writing a comic, and you can read it here! Obake and Megane-Kun The story is about "An ordinary 17-year old boy, Mikoshiba Takuto, encounters a beautiful ghost girl, who goes by the name Rinka. Rinka wishes to be reincarnated, for she is a wandering soul. The only way to successfully reincarnate, is to choose a single human being to scare. Her choice was Takuto. Join these two in an irregular, four panel love-comedy!" I've only just started, and I need a lot of improvements in four-panel comics, but please do spend 5 minutes to read it, and give me any feedback! :D Anything would hel